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선생님, 말씀하신대로 수업 게시판에 LAQs statements 올려요!
Silk Road 같은 경우는 처음으로 본 LAQ 라서 Sample essay를 보고 썼기때문에 좀 비슷한것 같아요..^^;;
Analyze continuities and changes in patterns of interactions along the Silk Roads from 200 B.C.E to 1450 C.E. - 2009
Silk Road was the major trading route of Eurasia, established between Han dynasty of China and Rome of Europe around 200 C.E,until the Trans-Atlantic Triangular Trade Route was built following the Columbus’s 1492 voyage. The participants in Silk Road changed as the time passed, however the diffusion of ideas and goods never stopped and led to the development of technology. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sample Question 2014 Analyze similarities and differences in how TWO of the following empires used religion to govern before 1450
- Byzantine Empire - Islamic Caliphates - Mauran/ Gupta Empires
그리고 이건 how two of the following empires used religion to govern before 1450가 주제로 나왔던 LAQ에 대한 intro입니다. 선생님께서 강의하시면서 잡아주신 guideline을 따라 써서 그랬는지 제가 생각하기에는 그나마 준수한쪽에 속하는것같아요..
Christianity and Islam have a common background in that both of them are universalized and monotheistic religions. However, there are a major difference between them in the way that they were used in human history. Christianity took a vital role in consolidating an already existing state, whereas Islam served as the centripetal force to unify several groups of people into an organized form of society, in this case, Islamic Caliphates. Later, both religions became secular and used the religious power for wordly and political goals. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sample Question 2015 Analyze continuities and changes in labor systems in ONE of the following regions within the time period 1450 to 1900 - Latin American and the Caribbean - North America
이건 Labor System에 대한 LAQ 인트로인데요, 이것 또한 선생님께서 잡아주신 Guideline 포함, 수업 게시판에 질문 올려서 선생님이 디테일하게 더 알려주신 Plantation 의 특징을 쓰면서 Body는 개인적으로 마음에 드는데 (여기서 mining industry에서 Plantation farming으로 바뀌었다는 점을 설명하긴 했지만..)thesis statement를 못 썼습니다. Intro에 thesis 쓰는게 정말 만만치 않네요.. 혹시 Intro에는 문제 요약 + 배경지식 깔아주고 Body에 전개를 한 다음에 Conclusion에 Thesis를 써도 괜찮을까요?
The real beginning of world history starts with the Columbus’s 1492 voyage in which America was discovered. The majority of Latin America was conquered by Spain, except for Brazil ruled by Portugal. The journey of Columbus was mainly due to the Age of Exploration derived from mercantilism, a theory that believes that the wealth of a nation depends on its possession of precious materials such as gold and silver and therefore its government should maximize the foreign trade surplus and foster the establishment of colonies. During 15th and 18th centuries, the principal labor system in Latin America was based on slavery. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 2017 Long Essay Questions 2. Describe and explain a significant continuity and a significant change in labor migration in the period 1450-1750 C.E. 이 친구는 Labor Migration에 대한 LAQ인데 방금 위에 있었던 Labor System 에세이 친구랑 엄청 비슷.. 아니 너무 비슷한것같아요. 이래도 괜찮은건가요..? 그래도 여긴 thesis statement를 쓰는데 성공했습니다! (잘 쓰진 못했고 쓰는데만 성공했어요 ㅠㅠ)
After the discovery of America by Columbus’s voyage in 1492, the attention of the world, especially Europe, was fixed to America in order to find any possibility to generate profits, because during the period, many European states believed in mercantilism and therefore they were eager to maximize foreign trade surplus and establish colonies. The continuities with regard to the labor migration was the constant flow of slavery and migration from Africa to Americas and the change is the kind of industry on which the labor force was concentrated.
그런데 이렇게 보니까 Silk Road, Labor Migration, Labor System 세 개의 essay에 Columbus's 1492 voyage가 들어가있네요... 하하^^;; ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 2017 Long Essay Questions 3. Describe and explain a significant continuity and a significant change in the global balance of political power in the period 1900 C.E. to the present. 그리고 마지막으로 이 친구가 저의 마음을 가장 심란하게 했던 친구입니다. 이 essay는 그냥.. 맘에 안들어요 ㅠ^ㅠ Intro부터 안 친해지고 싶은 아이에요..
After undergoing drastic changes during 17th and 18th centuries due to industrialization, urbanization, the Enlightenment, colonization and imperialism, the 20th century is characterized by World War I, World War II, and Cold war. The one of the most notable changes is the emergence of United States of America as the supreme power the introduction of Japan as one of the world powers and the continuity is the power of Western Europe.
선생님, 어떻게 생각하시는지 알려주시면 저번 답변에 남겨주신 이메일 주소로 메일 보내겠습니다!!
교재에 나와있던 LAQ들을 다 써봤는데.. 년도까지는 책에 나와 있는데 몇 번인지는 안 나와 있는 것도 있네요.. 죄송해요ㅠㅠ
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